With eighty-five
John the Baptisthe soiled the river bedwith his words of "One Love"he dunked the liars and the thievesalong with the devotedBut with just eighty five left we should forgive him his trespassClaire she...
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Enjoyed this Erik. That's a strong poem! Very well written and expressed.
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ThanksGlad that you liked this onegetting into stranger places as of late...hmmmERik New Page 1 Cinderella, she seems so easy "It takes one to know one," she smiles And puts her hands in her back...
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Very interesting and intriguing piece Erik, much enjoyed it. Powerfully written. Mystic~Mystic~"Spend all your time waiting for that second chance, For a break that would make it okay, Theres always...
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MysticThanks for the wordsand for the readand the time that you took with this oneMuch appreciatedERik New Page 1 Cinderella, she seems so easy "It takes one to know one," she smiles And puts her...
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Great thinking piece Erik, powerfully written...now I'm off to light a candle and meditate......Karen
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Very interesting piece...a lot of images rolled up into this one...and a surreal edge to a lot of the images...from a riverbank 2000 years ago to a side street cafe...plenty to think on here,...
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KarenYeah Go an light a candle for me tooI am glad that you read thisthanks for the wordsand the timeERik New Page 1 Cinderella, she seems so easy "It takes one to know one," she smiles And puts her...
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Yeah Soulseasethis was a lot longer piece when it was first doneBut I cut the hell out of itso there are a few other "Characters" that were felled by the mighty edit machine heheAnd I think that maybe...
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This was really good. Nice imagery with some very grounded emotion. The characters compelled me to read on. Thanks I enjoyed this.
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Thanks for the read PaulI am most happy that you enjoyed this ERik New Page 1 Cinderella, she seems so easy "It takes one to know one," she smiles And puts her hands in her back pockets Bette Davis...
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